Right or Wrong: Fiction Friday

The Friday Fictioneer Challenge: Write a 100-word story based on the photo.

FF 157 CE Ayr

Photo copyright C.E. Ayr

Right or Wrong

“This wasn’t here last time!” Trina exclaimed. The boulder blocked their path.

Trudy rolled her eyes at her younger, twin sister.

“Maybe it fell out of the sky?” Trina guessed.

“Boulders don’t just come out of nowhere!” Trudy objected.

Trina defended herself, “Just because you are 12 minutes older than me doesn’t make you always right about everything!”

A loud, whooshing sound caused them to look up. Another boulder plunged towards them, crashing into Trina, killing her.

Finally Trudy acquiesced, “Well, sis, you were right. I was wrong. Boulders do fall out of the sky. Who knew?”

I wrote a second version of this story, based on a comment from my fellow Friday Fictioneer writer, Granonine. Read the second version of Right or Wrong here.

This week’s photograph is by C.E. Ayr, also a Friday Fictioneer writer. Check out C.E.’s story: Love.

To read other Friday Fictioneer stories based on this photo, select the smiley blue frog.

16 thoughts on “Right or Wrong: Fiction Friday

  1. Haha – twin sisters, neither budging, twin boulders, and a wizard of oz moment. Excellent. Sorry if that summary seems flippant but I am smiling so much. Thank you. And I did check out your linked recommendation and listened to the recording. Another fine flash.

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